Free Sample Sales Letter: Example of How to Write a Persuasive Business Marketing Letter

Here is an example of a business-to-business salesYou hand cards like this to everyone whose business
letter mailed to auto dealers by a firm that markets giftyou want to attract and whose loyalty you must keep.
cards that replace paper gift certificates. Anything inWalk ins. Be Backs. Looky-Lous. Current customers.
brackets [like this] did not appear in the letter but simplyEven former customers. They all use the card to buy
appears to describe the mechanics of the letterproducts and services at your auto dealership only.
Author: Alan SharpeYou manage the program using a simple card reader
Target audience: General managers of autohooked to a personal computer at your dealership
dealershipsrunning our software. For an average auto dealership,
Mailer: Sharpe AutoCards [a fictional company for thethe start-up cost of buying the system and operating it
purposes of this sample letter]for one year is less than $2 per car sold that year.
Purpose: Generate appointments for salespeopleThat's what the card does. Here's what it does for
[MAILING ENVELOPE]you.
[Is 5 x 9 inches in dimension and has a window,Please read the brochure I've enclosed for the
through which appears a portion of a gift card,compelling specifics. You use the Sharpe AutoCards
personalized with the prospect's name. The envelopecard to:
has a teaser headline: Inside: A win-win-lose proposition1. Close more sales by beating competitors' discounts
for your auto dealership.]2. Boost your service department revenue and repeat
[LETTER]business
[Is 8 1/2 x 11 inches, copy on both sides]3. Multiply your accessories department revenue
December 27, 20074. Retain customers for years after the sale
Brad Carling, General Manager5. Attract potential customers and increase traffic in
Tri-City Chev-Oldsyour showroom
123 Any Street6. Increase referral business
Anytown OH 12345-91637. Increase revenue on the back end
[Right here, beneath the prospect's name, is affixed to8. Promote brand awareness of your dealership
the letter a sample auto gift card, personalized with theThe Sharpe AutoCards system is up to five times less
prospect's name, and this headline: As you can see,expensive than competing offerings. Plus, you pay no
this card has success written all over it.]transaction fees and you don't have to buy any annual
Dear Mr. Carling:maintenance contracts. I call that a win-win-lose
Go ahead, pull this amazing little card off the paper.proposition for you, your customers and your
It's made of plastic. It costs you $2 to buy. But it'scompetitors.
worth the price of a new car, sold off your lot. ThisUse your card today to receive free coffee and
card is worth the lifetime value of a loyal customer. Indonuts for four.
sales, service, parts, accessories and referrals. AndThe gift card you are holding in your hand has been
goodwill. And free word-of-mouth advertising.pre-loaded with $10 worth of coffee and donuts. Get a
Hold it in you hand for a minute, and think of yourfirst-hand demonstration of how the card works by
competition. Consider your revenue goals for the nextinviting me to your showroom for a complimentary
quarter. Do you need to increase your new and usedconsultation about the Sharpe AutoCards system.
vehicle sales? Boost your parts & service departmentHand me your gift card, I'll swipe it, process your
revenue? Multiply your accessories departmenttransaction, and hand over your free coffee and
revenue? Retain customers after their warranty runsdonuts. Like the gift cards you'll use one day, this one
out?can only be redeemed at the place of business on the
This card will help. Big time. It's a vital part of Sharpecard, which is to say, Tri-City Chev-Olds.
AutoCards, a custom-branded loyalty and gift cardWhen is a good time for us to get together for coffee
program that generates revenue for your dealership.and a chat at your showroom? Call me at 123
But first, how it works.456-7891 today and let's set up an appointment.
Take a look at the front of your card. As you can see,Yours sincerely,
you customize the card to match your dealership's[signature in blue ink]
brand image and visual identity. Now turn it over. SeeBrad K Phillips, Director, Sales
that magnetic stripe across the back? It storesSharpe AutoCards
information about the card's dollar value and each© 2005 Sharpe Copy Inc.
transaction.